Tuesday, 5 May 2015

Discursive essay by Narada Chaowonglert




Is cosmetic/plastic 

surgery worth? 

Cosmetic and plastic surgery have both benefits and disadvantage and very popular in society today. It can’t deny that women don’t like cosmetic because every women or girls want to be a good looking and a beautiful person. The appearance is the most important in society today.
Nowadays, many people use cosmetics can go to get plastic surgery because they want to be a good looking and this way can accept them in work or society. The appearance is the first impression for  the people whether it be in work or boyfriend/girlfriend that they want to make them feel impression when the first meet. 
Firstly, In the past surgery has not popular yet because in society, the most people anti surgery because they prefer natural face more than surgery face but now, not like as the past. The people like to go to get surgery because it can make them confident in society and their work because some works they want to hire the people from an appearance the first. (source1)
Furthermore, If you are not ready to surgery or don’t have enough money to go to get a surgery, you can buy cosmetics instead because it is the way to make you get a good looking and cheaper than go to surgery. Cosmetics also make you get money because some jobs, they use cosmetics to make them get more money such as makeup artist, beauty salon etc.(source2)
Finally, cosmetic and surgery are very important in daily life, it is can make them get more confident but it also has some advantages which is some people are not be satisfied with the result of surgery so, they go back to surgery over and over again and this way can make them addicted surgery and might be worst instead they would get a good looking result.(source3)


In conclusion, I strongly agree with cosmetic and plastic surgery are worth to get it because  it can make you get a good looking, get a good job and can make you get acceptance in society So, it cannot deny that cosmetics or surgery are not worth or important in daily life. 


1 comment:

  1. Great information and don't forget to check some incorrect grammar.

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